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Song Info:  'I Want To Get On It' by Lunkhead    
Avg. Rating: 10.00
# of Ratings: 13
Posted: 2008-02-03 00:37:06
I started this for a SongFight! Today I spent a few hours trying to get it to the point where I would have submitted to the fight if I'd finished it in time. It's very much a work in progress still, though. I kind of rushed through writing the last 1/3rd of the lyrics today and the recording of the vocals... (there are some pitchy spots). EDIT: I cut out 30 seconds of the instrumental bits to trim it down from 4' to 3'30", since it's kind of repetitive. I also fixed the pitch of the vocals in a couple spots so far.

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haha, cute lyric.
[ 0 replies ] --- blue 2008-02-03 04:53
Cute, but the lyric to me suggests funk and big band groove, which this isn't, obviously. Also, list lyrics SUCK even though I like the list you make. As it stands this a good song, so that's what I'll give it, but for me, this chord sequence combined with the lyric cry out for fat prince funk. just so you know ...
[ 0 replies ] --- johnny cashpoint 2008-02-03 19:37
Yeah, I can relate to those lyrics. Been there... Musically this song is a bit flat to my ears. But good.
[ 0 replies ] --- Tuuur 2008-02-04 09:34
Yeah, this is a really good take on that title. I like the smooth groove and laid back vocal track. Not sure if the drums are as cool (I mean that as in cool daddio and all that jazz) as the rest, though. I want less snare and more cymbals or something. It's a good song, though. nice!
[ 0 replies ] --- frankie 2008-02-04 18:08
This song is cool. Songwritingly, it reminds me of "Hate to Say I Told You So" by The Hives. If you would do that song in this style, that would be awesome as well.

Lyrically, the first verse is frickin perfect. SOLID. The second verse, that whole "I'm finally acting my age, we all have roles to play" part just kinds of springs out of nowhere and seems kind of weird because it implies a whole lot that needs more splaining, which you can't really do in a list song. If you feel like tweaking anything, I'd tweak here. The third verse is nice. I wish it ended with more resolution, though.

I like this song.
[ 0 replies ] --- E r i k 2008-02-04 22:21
good tune sam. you actually sound alot like brad on this (and it sounds like something he'd write).
[ 0 replies ] --- jack 2008-02-04 23:25
Thanks for the feedback! I cut out 12 bars of noodly instrumental bits to trim it down from 4' to 3'30", since it's kind of repetitive. I also fixed the pitch of the vocals in a couple spots so far. As for working on the lyrics further, that's going to take some more time.
[ 0 replies ] --- Lunkhead 2008-02-06 02:25
this sneaks into [good] with its absolute masterly performance from the lazy guitar and sonics to the fine vocal indifference. Very fine, sir!
[ 1 reply ] --- roymond 2008-02-07 17:07
I found this song enjoyable to listen to
[ 0 replies ] --- Dustface 2008-02-14 10:31



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