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Song Info:  'Sorry About the Plums' by Jon Eric    
Avg. Rating: 5.62
# of Ratings: 8
Posted: 2008-02-28 01:16:47
My attempt at February Album Writing Month will result in all of four finished songs. This is one of them. Bass by Ian McCarthy.
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The mix sounds very mono. The plugged-in acoustic guitar sounds really thin. The vocals are mostly on pitch except for a few notable places like "better with wine". The drums need to be quantized or something. Overall an [okay] song. Could be good with a better performance/recording.

[ 0 replies ] --- Lunkhead 2008-02-29 21:00
Good demo, it's a bit rough, but it's a nice song. The lyrics are fun and maybe could be sung with a bit more fun. I liked it though and would like to hear a more polished version if one ever gets made.
[ 0 replies ] --- adam adamant 2008-03-01 10:34
I have to assume you've read
http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/williams/1047

It's a pretty famous poem.
I agree about the 'more fun' comment, a little faster, too. It's a good story, it could use some polishing.
[ 0 replies ] --- madtho 2008-03-05 22:02
This is really too sloppy for me.
Maybe you should consider using a drumcomputer to get at least the rhythm on the beat.
Also, I don't like the lyrics or songwriting that much... but all in all a nice demo. OK.
[ 0 replies ] --- Tuuur 2008-03-12 17:14



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